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I'm offering to do Critiques on Writing, and Art. I am a writer, and I dabble in art as well. If your are looking for someones opinion I am willing to share mine if you want. I might charge a tip fee for my critique, but nothing much just what ever you think my opinion and the time I took out to do this was worth to you, be it if you would like to draw me something or write me something, or even donate a few points to me.

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I just posted a contest on freelancer.com please note me with your portfolio and I will give you more information about the project.
I just posted a contest on freelancer.com All the information can be found at the website link below

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I started writing a stand alone novel and soon realized it had potential to be more so now I have begun plotting the trilogy.

This trilogy is kind of odd in the fact that it starts in the middle. The second book is the prequel and the third book is the sequel.

The trilogy is very much a representation of past, present and future.

For the stories present and first book I am calling it The Crimson Sea.

For the stories past and second book I am calling it The Crimson Tide.

For the stories future and third book I am calling it The Crimson Wake.

My question is wanting to get some feedback on the title choices I am calling it "The  Crimson Trilogy".
I got a question do you think I should wait to write my masterpiece story until later in my career so it will be of a higher quality do to having more experience?

 I am right at the beginning. I am not saying something might not surpass it in the future but as of now I can't see that happening. Out of the 30 stories I have to tell that are all fleshed out in the sense of knowing where they start and where they are going this is by far the best and most epic.

Its planned for 10 books a stand alone, a 7 book series and a trilogy. The story is going to be able to be consumed in multiple ways like star wars I would compare it to in the sense of people swear by watching it in different orders for the best experience.
00: Leader Giovanni Anic BRAIN
Giovanni Anic is the father of Michael Anic, and the creator of Michelle Anic. Giovanni was a revolutionary inventor who was years ahead of his time, he was responsible for most of  the technological breakthroughs during his life. Before reaching his human limits, he began experimenting on organic cybernetics. He tested on animals first, but as time grew nearer he quickly moved on to human trials. Upon human trial success he modified his own body to forgo the limitations of a human body.

Age: 50-60
Height: Medium
Weight: Medium
Hair: White Long Ponytail
Eyes: Blue
Clothes:
Open White Lab Coat

Mechanic Jump Suit
Mechanic by iSohei

White Dress Shirt

White Dress Pants
Mechanic Leather Boots
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Medical Scrub Covers
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Accessories: Goggles, Glasses

Weapons: 10 Laser Ball Drones, and 2 laser Pistols

      
01: Right hand Yin GUARD
Sex: Male
Height: Medium
Weight:Medium
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02: Left hand Yang GUARD
Sex: Male
Height: Medium
Weight: Medium
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BRAWN

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NINJA

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BRAIN (Analog Hacker?)

Okay they should be an analog hacker meaning they hack things physically. I am thinking he should have an arsenal of USB drives that he can load into a revolver with a scope that shoots them. I think he should have a top hat that is connected to his brain acting as additional memory and ram allowing him to access a higher IQ. He wears a visor around his head allowing him to see what data he accesses. He has a game controller that controls his motorized wheelchair that he uses to transport his body while controlling the people he takes over when he shoots them with his revolver.

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Male
Height: Medium
Weight: Medium
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Clothes: Top hat, visor, game controller, motorized wheelchair.
Weapon:
Scoped revolver

RQ: iamversatility by InAWorldAllHerOwnAnalog Hacker-Request by PumaForge


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Spy

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10:
Michelle Anic Mechanic

Sex: Female
Height: Medium
Weight: Medium
Hair: White
Eye: Blue
Skin-tone: Pale
Clothes:
Goggles, bandanna, jumpsuit, baggy pants, tight shirt, jacket
Weapon: Giant C wrench

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Lanokir Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the watch! c:
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Thanks for adding me to your watch! XD
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MarinaMcCogan Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
hy, sorry for the late reply. of course you can another part to the souls poem, i will update it then. cherio
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Here is the Request ^_^ i hope you like it

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Thanks for the watch.
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thanks for the favs!
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i got that request done guy :)squintinturninchino.deviantart…
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Bakutaro Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sorry I couldn't do your request from... almost 2 months ago gee I'm bad... sorry
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Thanx for the watch!!^^
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