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All of the dogs fall into the water through the ice most of them die.
He can only save one he then pulls the sled while the dog is on the sled trying to get home safe to see his dog and himself through the hard winter blizzard
Main Character: Male
Wheel Dogs: 2
Team Dogs: 2
Point Dogs: 2
Lead Dogs: 2
Plot: The yearly sled dog team race is about to begin.
The sled dog team race begins and each sled rushes off the starting line on a week long race.
The competition is fierce. Several sleds are neck and neck off the starting line.
One of the lead dogs gets injured by colliding with another sled dog team.
The sled dog team is passed by every other team and is now dead last, but they arenít ready to give up.
The man straps the injured dog to the sled and changes his rig to account for there only being one lead dog now.
The team is in a hurry and they are running as fast as they can to catch up to the teams that passed them by.
A blizzard hits in the middle of the race making it very hard to see ahead of them. The sled dog team begins to go off course and starts to cross a thin ice patch.
The sound of the ice cracking sounds like the earth is shattering. The man commands the dogs to slow down to a stop when suddenly the ice gives way between the sled and the lead dog. One by one the dogs begin to fall into the ice dragging the next dogs with them. The man commanded the lead dog to circle back towards the sled. The man gets off his sled and ties a rope to the lead dogs harness and commands the lead dog to pull with him. They begin to pull the sled back with all their strength, trying to get the dogs to resurface by force. By the time he gets the dogs to resurface he is too late. 5 of the dogs drown to death, and the 6th dog quickly died of hypothermia.
The man completely broke down crying and screaming out in grief over the loss of his comrades. The lead dog didnít seem to understand what was going on and was nudging the bodies with his nose trying to get them to wake up. The injured dog was also whimpering trying to get the dogs attention not understanding what was going on.
The man began to unload supplies off his sled to lighten the load. With those supplies he created a makeshift grave site for his comrades and marked the graves using the supplies so he could come back and get their bodies and properly lay them to rest.
The man changes his rig and attaches a harness to himself and the lead dog and begins to pull with all their might walking ever slowly through the blizzard towards the next checkpoint.
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